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Potsmoke66
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just a few pics of it

because it's in a very primarely stage and many pages are mostly uncolored and the reasonable bright pencil is impossible to scan.

for some i tuned contrast of the pic extremely to show only a little.

page1-0.jpg

the rest is better to watch as a slide show i guess,

i told you it's unfinished and a lot pages i didn't scanned.

i did this only to get some comments on it, because personally i thought it was a silly cartoon.

but if some really, really like it, i mean if they would possibly spend some cents for it (you don't have to, only hypothetical), i will finish it.

untitled unfinished neverending shorstory by potsmoke66

i will shortly describe you the story...

- our hero get's sucked into a black hole, he was a little off his mind.

- he "materialises" unfortunately into the stomache of a cow.

- he explored the world he was thrown in

- he reckon the troubles they have

- he offers a solution

- hard work makes tired, he falls a sleep, a long time

- he woke up, only to see that without his help everything turned back to darkness.

- he got frustrated and leaves

- beeing a little off his mind...


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Go for it pots your got some real talent there and if you get some enjoyment out of it that’s even better.

Like the pop art style really works well. 😎


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I am surprised, I actually found this to be quite amusing!

Keep it up.

P.S. Be honest, were you high when you came up with the idea? 😉


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DarkOne
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Potsmoke you should look into RenPy to render the story http://www.renpy.org/

I have installed this and it looks simple enough to figure out the code for pages, speech and any music you may want to put in.


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Potsmoke66
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which time i wasn't high?

both would be wrong, but the idea is, let's say, grown slowly.

psychedelic arts are a special love of of me anyway,

but tell which art isn't psychedelic, it leaves always an impression in your mind.

it's more a story about myself and that i shouldn't oversleep 😉


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